Wharnsby Concert Poster 2

ok you know when you've stared at something WAY too long and u just dont know what you see anymore? thats me right now with this poster. though, i listened to everyones feedback and went back to the poster for a few more drafts. they got worse before they got better hehe. now i definately think it looks CLEANER and brighter.. but for some reason he's starting to look like a stand up comedian more than a singer. i dunno maybe thats just cuz im staring at it too long.

i really appreciate everyones feed back (~mohoohaha and ~Psychiatry pointed somethings out in particular). even if its something small like knowing it didnt cause you to go into convulsions, it really really helps! *muah*

i'm very sorry for posting the same ad idea again..
here's the previous Wharnsby Concert Poster.